Compare and contrast

Tell us what you enjoy about it.

It tell the difference between positive and negative.

Describe what it around you: Jack and Jurgen

DESCRIBE WHAT IT AROUND YOU. 

One day or night in the ship there were a lot of people around me,

even my brother.

Now we were in a cafeteria.

They had a table in there and they even had one leftover pizza on top

of the table and;

also one emergency button on top of the table.

They have a vent in the cafeteria. I wonder if I can vent but

I don’t want to do it in front of people.

I was now walking to Med bay. I saw black was doing a scan.

There were four beds in Med bay; they also have a vent too.

In Med bay they have a huge TV with a keyboard in there.

I saw purple. My brother was closer to black during the scan.

I saw my brother venting and I also

saw black dead body closer to the scanner.

I vented Med bay to security because I was so scared if I got caught.

In security they also have a huge TV but it is a security camera TV.

I saw the light was going down and then now everything was black

till then I had night vision. Everything was now clear.

When I was alone with yellow my body felt weird.

I felt like I was an alien, my mouth was open with sharp teeth inside.

My space suit was ripped and showed my mouth and till then

my sharp tongue was sticking then I stabbed yellow with my tongue.

And then I hear a scary sound. I think it is our victory sound.

This story tells us about what is around you.

My Analysis

Term4-week4

My texts about the Sea: Jack and Jurgen

Find your own videos, articles and stories about the sea! 

Fill out this table to compare and contrast the mood and atmosphere of these texts. 

Name + Author	Atmosphere	Mood	How did the author create this mood and atmosphere?	Language features you can spot
News article about the sea  link	The sea was kinda calm and it looked like they were finding their home.	calmness, peace of mind, scared, and sus, proud, fearless.	He uses personification and emotivity. Dizzy too many things on her mird, Freaking out stressed.	Emotive language: Hame,Tiny and Taken.  Personification: Her mind was racing sick.
A fictional story link	The wild band of horses was.	Wild, Sad, Loud, annoying,made-up, fanciful.	He or she uses fiction. Is to make up a story.	Emotive language: Live, surrounding, touris, Alive.
A nonfiction story link	It was quiet and boring.	Bored,quiet, and perplexed.	She uses nonfiction. And composition,essay and fiction.	Emotive language: oComposition Saturday.
A video about the Sea link	It was satisfying and it was an adventure.	Deserted, desolate,  destitute and  empty.	They use sound and 3D animation and voice. They use colours and	Emotive Language: Lost Memory loss Adventure finding.

We are working on finding language features!

Next time we will look at what effect they have. 

Concept Star:Jack and Jurgen