Nice job here Jurgen! A great start back at school. You have chosen some really great songs that even I listen to. I can see you have carefully chosen your favourite songs and I like the way you have presented your answers in a different colour. This makes it nice a clear for viewers!
Next steps: Let's work on elaborating on your ideas. You have shown me that you can write grammatically correct, simple sentences. Now, I want to see more detail and atleast two sentences per answer. Keep up the great Mahi.
Kia ora Jurgen, I really appreciate you sharing this song. it very helpful to me cause I really like songs like this it's pretty much my favourite. I like songs emotional it just I don't know I just like it but thank you,But I think you should work on writing more so you know write more to make it better thank you.
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Nice job here Jurgen! A great start back at school. You have chosen some really great songs that even I listen to. I can see you have carefully chosen your favourite songs and I like the way you have presented your answers in a different colour. This makes it nice a clear for viewers!
ReplyDeleteNext steps: Let's work on elaborating on your ideas. You have shown me that you can write grammatically correct, simple sentences. Now, I want to see more detail and atleast two sentences per answer. Keep up the great Mahi.
Good job Jurgen, I love your song choices. You have a good taste in music.
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Kia ora Jurgen, thank you for sharing some of your favourite songs. It's great how a song can remind us of the time when we first listened to it!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jurgen, I really appreciate you sharing this song. it very helpful to me cause I really like songs like this it's pretty much my favourite. I like songs emotional it just I don't know I just like it but thank you,But I think you should work on writing more so you know write more to make it better thank you.
ReplyDeleteAmazing job Jurgen I like the songs that you chose Keep it up!
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