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Monday 23 November 2020

Describe what it around you: Jack and Jurgen

DESCRIBE WHAT IT AROUND YOU. 


One day or night in the ship there were a lot of people around me,

even my brother.

Now we were in a cafeteria.

They had a table in there and they even had one leftover pizza on top

of the table and;

also one emergency button on top of the table.

They have a vent in the cafeteria. I wonder if I can vent but

I don’t want to do it in front of people.

I was now walking to Med bay. I saw black was doing a scan.

There were four beds in Med bay; they also have a vent too.

In Med bay they have a huge TV with a keyboard in there.

I saw purple. My brother was closer to black during the scan.

I saw my brother venting and I also

saw black dead body closer to the scanner.

I vented Med bay to security because I was so scared if I got caught.

In security they also have a huge TV but it is a security camera TV.

I saw the light was going down and then now everything was black

till then I had night vision. Everything was now clear.

When I was alone with yellow my body felt weird.

I felt like I was an alien, my mouth was open with sharp teeth inside.

My space suit was ripped and showed my mouth and till then

my sharp tongue was sticking then I stabbed yellow with my tongue.

And then I hear a scary sound. I think it is our victory sound.

This story tells us about what is around you.

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