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Tuesday 15 September 2020

My Heroes

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7 comments:

  1. kavel17 September 2020 at 13:56

    hello this kavel from room 9 and I could not read all of the work because there is so much and have a good day :)

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  2. Rasheed22 September 2020 at 13:27

    Hello Jurgen

    Hello Jurgen I believe that you have done a great job on your hero work. You have listed alot of heroes and I wanted to say that I also think that my parents are heroes. Its great to see that someone else shares my opinion.

    Rasheed

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    1. Rasheed22 September 2020 at 13:29

      Also what made you think that your parents are heroes?

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    2. Rasheed22 September 2020 at 13:30

      Also what made you think that your parents are heroes?

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  3. Roseena 22 September 2020 at 13:39

    Kia Jurgen!
    Nice piece of work, I really like who you chose and I liked the reasons! You had very reasonable grounds. Next time maybe you should more everyday heroes to you. :) Such as your teacher or the police. Out of all of these, Who is your favourite?
    Cheers,
    Roseena

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  4. Unknown22 September 2020 at 13:46

    Kia Ora Jurgen I like how you said your mum and dad are your heroes. Maybe next time you can try make your sentences make more sense.

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  5. Mahtab22 September 2020 at 14:10

    Hi, I like your work it is good I like your words. Can you fix the word bed guy to bad guy?

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